One Step Closer (time for the quick read through)

Broken HomeI’m looking for 5-6 readers to give Broken Home a read-through. Just looking for the standard stuff. Does it make sense? Was it enjoyable? Is there anything that needs to be cleared up/made better/even omitted? Would you be willing to pay 99 cents for it? $1.99?  (new at short story pricing)

You can get in touch with me via email, the comments section, etc. The cool thing is it is a short read. I’m hoping it’s equivalent to a bowl of popcorn. 🙂